Poem I wrote hubby for our 1st anniversary

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  1. Bellybee

    Bellybee Silver Member

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    Hi,

    Hope you dont mind me sharing but heres the poem i wrote for my first anniversary. I had it printed on a canvas print of one of our wedding photos (ah fond memories)

    One Year On
    365 days have passed
    Weeks to months to a year
    Since as man and wife at that time in our life
    We were joined my dear
    I want to declare our love and adoration to all
    Every gesture no matter how small

    I love the way you ruffle my hair
    Fond words said that show you care
    You are sensitve, handsome and kinsd
    I look forward to the years and the joys we will find

    Can you see us in the future?
    Grown old and grey
    Still declaring our love every day by day
    Grandkids will give us memories fond
    Laughter to smile at on evenings long

    Our wedding day was wonderful and amazing
    but the day led to something more
    Our marriage is the thing I nurture
    Because that is the key to my door

    And so our 1st anniversary
    has arrived here today
    Celebrated with paper
    and with joy we say
    for paper is cheap
    but the sentiments rich
    lets celebrate with joy
    the day that we got hitched
     
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  3. Diva

    Diva Cambridge Diet Counsellor

    Awwwwwwww how sweet is that!!! It's lovely, BellyBee....Congratulation on your anniversary! :D
     
  4. Bellybee

    Bellybee Silver Member

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    Thanks it's actually quite an old poem we have been married for over two years now oops should have added that
     
  5. Geri

    Geri Gold Member

    Ahh belly,
    that's really lovely :D
     
  6. zareena

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    Very very sweet!! :)
     
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