Poem inspired by our very own mini

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  1. Bellybee

    Bellybee Silver Member

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    Hi Guys,

    Mini sent me a message earlier comparing women to phoenix's rising from the ashes. It would make a beautiful picture but I can't draw so I have wrote this and be asked to post it. Am very embarrased by it's poor quality.

    The earth was on fire filled with ash and smoke
    Through the destruction something beautiful awoke
    Life was being created anew
    Something good worth clinging to

    Orange and silver and wings so wide
    They had no shame nothing to hide
    Wonderful shimmering, free they needed the world to see
    These creatures were phoenix’s real for you and me

    Their message was simple and true
    Be good to yourself always be you
    They were the woman who had fought the good fight
    Now they are free to enjoy there wondrous flight
     
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  3. chicken on a mission

    chicken on a mission Restarting to lose 4stone

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    Right that's me in tears again :( beautiful, thanks for posting it :D
     
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    Hi Bellybee,

    That is just beautiful and like chicken I am in tears reading it.

    Love Mini xxx
     
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    Thanks girls thats very sweet of you to say that
     
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    Oh Bellybee! That was just so beautifull, you have a wonderfull talent for poetry!
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    That's lovely BB....I have a picture of a phoenix somewhere and I'll put those words alongside it to remind me to continue to be me.....:D

    Thanks, hun...xxx
     
  8. DQ

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    That was truly lovely - thanks honey xx
     
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    Thats really lovely BB thanks for that !!! Damn my broken printer would of loved to print that one out so i have saved it till i get round to buying a new one xxxx
     
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    BB that was amazing girl. The tears are rolling down here too.....x
     
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    WOW! BB!

    You really have a talent there!

    A beautiful poem for a beautiful girl!
     
  12. Bellybee

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    Thanks tulips not sure its a true talent to be sure I would like to be able to write properly poems, stories etc as have always been very into that but its not easy and I always think it looks rubbish to me. To be honest I cant bear to read it as soon as I have written it.
    By the way it's written for all the women of the forum as they are all beautiful and they inspired mini's words which in turn inspired the poem
     
  13. Isobel1965

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    Super!!!!! Am loving it!!!!!
     
  14. DQ

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    You have a real talent mate - I really loved reading this and hope you will share more.
     
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    That poem is so lovely, made me so sad though, cos that is how it should be, why did we have to be born and grow up with so much shame...
    Well done BB and keep it up, and we all know Mini is a great inspiration!
    Love Matty
     
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