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Poem inspired by our very own mini

Bellybee

Silver Member
#1
Hi Guys,

Mini sent me a message earlier comparing women to phoenix's rising from the ashes. It would make a beautiful picture but I can't draw so I have wrote this and be asked to post it. Am very embarrased by it's poor quality.

The earth was on fire filled with ash and smoke
Through the destruction something beautiful awoke
Life was being created anew
Something good worth clinging to

Orange and silver and wings so wide
They had no shame nothing to hide
Wonderful shimmering, free they needed the world to see
These creatures were phoenix’s real for you and me

Their message was simple and true
Be good to yourself always be you
They were the woman who had fought the good fight
Now they are free to enjoy there wondrous flight
 
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chicken on a mission

Restarting to lose 4stone
#2
Hi Guys,

Mini sent me a message earlier comparing women to phoenix's rising from the ashes. It would make a beautiful picture but I can't draw so I have wrote this and be asked to post it. Am very embarrased by it's poor quality.

The earth was on fire filled with ash and smoke
Through the destruction something beautiful awoke
Life was being created anew
Something good worth clinging to

Orange and silver and wings so wide
They had no shame nothing to hide
Wonderful shimmering, free they needed the world to see
These creatures were phoenix’s real for you and me

Their message was simple and true
Be good to yourself always be you
They were the woman who had fought the good fight
Now they are free to enjoy there wondrous flight

Right that's me in tears again :( beautiful, thanks for posting it :D
 

Mini

Administrator
Staff member
#3
Hi Bellybee,

That is just beautiful and like chicken I am in tears reading it.

Love Mini xxx
 

tpott

Silver Member
#5
Oh Bellybee! That was just so beautifull, you have a wonderfull talent for poetry!
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Diva

Cambridge Diet Counsellor
#6
That's lovely BB....I have a picture of a phoenix somewhere and I'll put those words alongside it to remind me to continue to be me.....:D

Thanks, hun...xxx
 

DQ

Queen of the Damned
#7
That was truly lovely - thanks honey xx
 

kandy

Silver Member
#8
Thats really lovely BB thanks for that !!! Damn my broken printer would of loved to print that one out so i have saved it till i get round to buying a new one xxxx
 

Isis

Ancient Egypt Nut!
#9
BB that was amazing girl. The tears are rolling down here too.....x
 

Bellybee

Silver Member
#11
Thanks tulips not sure its a true talent to be sure I would like to be able to write properly poems, stories etc as have always been very into that but its not easy and I always think it looks rubbish to me. To be honest I cant bear to read it as soon as I have written it.
By the way it's written for all the women of the forum as they are all beautiful and they inspired mini's words which in turn inspired the poem
 

DQ

Queen of the Damned
#13
You have a real talent mate - I really loved reading this and hope you will share more.
 

matty

Regular Member
#14
That poem is so lovely, made me so sad though, cos that is how it should be, why did we have to be born and grow up with so much shame...
Well done BB and keep it up, and we all know Mini is a great inspiration!
Love Matty
 


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