Anyone good at personal statements for admin jobs?

[big bear]

Could do with some help. I've written the statement but could do with a fresh pair of eyes to check it out for me & possible edit little bits.

If anyone is willing to have a look please give me a shout XX

 

[Trefoil]

I'll read it for you

Ruth
X

 

[big bear]

I'll read it for you

Ruth
X

Thanks hun, if I email you the job description & my statement would that be ok??