bondgirl
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Hello everyone
Ok so I'm a closet poet just thought I would post some poems for a bit of feedback
All I ever wanted was to make things right,
It wasn’t my first choice but I thought we’d get by.
Your tone and words weren’t always cruel,
The rows were the fire and your anger the fuel
After that first time I blamed myself,
I didn’t want to accept you needed help.
My tears at night would often flow,
The pain you caused I couldn’t show.
After you’d gone I cried and cried,
Angry at myself for how I’d tried.
You didn’t succeed to kill my soul,
Infact when you left I became whole.
The pain and anger that you brought,
Will never in this family again be sought.
Let me know what you think
Love to all
Zoe x
Ok so I'm a closet poet just thought I would post some poems for a bit of feedback
Anger and Pain
All I ever wanted was to make things right,
It wasn’t my first choice but I thought we’d get by.
Your tone and words weren’t always cruel,
The rows were the fire and your anger the fuel
After that first time I blamed myself,
I didn’t want to accept you needed help.
My tears at night would often flow,
The pain you caused I couldn’t show.
After you’d gone I cried and cried,
Angry at myself for how I’d tried.
You didn’t succeed to kill my soul,
Infact when you left I became whole.
The pain and anger that you brought,
Will never in this family again be sought.
Let me know what you think
Love to all
Zoe x