Slimming Resolution.

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  1. Emmaline

    Emmaline Hippety Hop!

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    While standing at the mirror, bare,
    I could but only in shock stare!
    The rotund figure what a sight
    I must be firm and end this plight
    To eat correctly all the things
    To end this flab and odd bulgings.
    So with the aid of "Slimming Books"
    With charts and special things to cook
    I wrote with speed a shopping list
    Of crispbreads, vegies, - I'll insist
    That meat will be so very lean
    And fish, cheese, eggs and mounds of green
    And putting lots of things in store
    Then I will have good foods galore
    And calories I'll count so that
    I'll soon be losing all this fat.
    .........

    Alas, my plans have gone to pot
    Cos in one day I ate the lot!!!

    .... ©
     
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  3. Emmaline

    Emmaline Hippety Hop!

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    response?

    I am more than alittle disappointed that despite the amount of people who have read my poem, nobody has bothered to give me a comment or two - whether liked, disliked, rubbish or otherwise! Is anyone out there?
     
  4. skinnydawn

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    Just found this thread tonight, and I love yr poems chic! It's really gd of u to take the time to put them on for us xx
     
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    I love this poem! I'm going to print it out and stick it on my fridge (changing the counting calories bit to counting syns haha)! Thank you xx
     
  7. sigourney

    sigourney Gold Member

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    Lol. Cool x

    Sent from my iPhone using MiniMins
     
  8. emma237

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    Love the poem - x
     
  9. Emmaline

    Emmaline Hippety Hop!

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    Thankyou everyone for your kind comments.
     
  10. mrs a

    mrs a fat,frumpy,fed up

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    haha - great poem ;)
     
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    Found this thread today. I enjoyed your poem, it's funny because you write in a way (a very good one) that it made me picture the whole scene on my mind;)

    Keep writing Emmaline :)
     
  12. trimlee

    trimlee Love God; Love People

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    Lovely poem Emma, loved the end especially (we can all identify with that!)
     
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    I just love poems like this, and boy can I identify with this one. Keep them coming please
     
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