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Slimming Resolution.

Emmaline

Hippety Hop!
S: 16st2lb C: 14st13.7lb G: 11st0lb BMI: 42.3 Loss: 1st2.3lb(7.21%)
#1
While standing at the mirror, bare,
I could but only in shock stare!
The rotund figure what a sight
I must be firm and end this plight
To eat correctly all the things
To end this flab and odd bulgings.
So with the aid of "Slimming Books"
With charts and special things to cook
I wrote with speed a shopping list
Of crispbreads, vegies, - I'll insist
That meat will be so very lean
And fish, cheese, eggs and mounds of green
And putting lots of things in store
Then I will have good foods galore
And calories I'll count so that
I'll soon be losing all this fat.
.........

Alas, my plans have gone to pot
Cos in one day I ate the lot!!!

.... ©
 
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Emmaline

Hippety Hop!
S: 16st2lb C: 14st13.7lb G: 11st0lb BMI: 42.3 Loss: 1st2.3lb(7.21%)
#2
response?

I am more than alittle disappointed that despite the amount of people who have read my poem, nobody has bothered to give me a comment or two - whether liked, disliked, rubbish or otherwise! Is anyone out there?
 
S: 15st5lb C: 14st3lb G: 10st5lb BMI: 32.1 Loss: 1st2lb(7.44%)
#3
Just found this thread tonight, and I love yr poems chic! It's really gd of u to take the time to put them on for us xx
 
S: 11st0lb C: 9st10.5lb G: 9st6lb BMI: 23.4 Loss: 1st3.5lb(11.36%)
#5
I love this poem! I'm going to print it out and stick it on my fridge (changing the counting calories bit to counting syns haha)! Thank you xx
 

Emmaline

Hippety Hop!
S: 16st2lb C: 14st13.7lb G: 11st0lb BMI: 42.3 Loss: 1st2.3lb(7.21%)
#8
Just found this thread tonight, and I love yr poems chic! It's really gd of u to take the time to put them on for us xx
I love this poem! I'm going to print it out and stick it on my fridge (changing the counting calories bit to counting syns haha)! Thank you xx
Lol. Cool x

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Love the poem - x
Thankyou everyone for your kind comments.
 

mrs a

fat,frumpy,fed up
G: 13st0lb
#9
haha - great poem ;)
 

Aline

Gold Member
C: 7st9lb BMI: 19.6
#10
Found this thread today. I enjoyed your poem, it's funny because you write in a way (a very good one) that it made me picture the whole scene on my mind;)

Keep writing Emmaline :)
 

trimlee

Love God; Love People
S: 13st0lb C: 11st13lb G: 11st0lb BMI: 27 Loss: 1st1lb(8.24%)
#11
Lovely poem Emma, loved the end especially (we can all identify with that!)
 


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