Deceive. [poem]

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  1. Teri

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    This poem is something I wrote around three years ago, and it's something important to me. Hence all the subtle messages which maybe you people won't understand. Anyway, I'd love to share my fourteen year old "talent" since I haven't made any changes to it since I've gotten older. XD

    It was just one day ago
    we were crying together
    odd should we say
    a group of lions is called a pride

    It was yesterday
    we were staring at the delicate clouds
    tasting nothingness on our tongues
    letting the rainwater trickle down our throats

    you touched my hand with your lips
    moved closer to me with just your warmth
    your eyes meeting mine
    I blink, look again, and you're crying

    You're sat infront of me
    smiling with such inaudible falsetto
    I couldn't hear it because you were gone
    right before i could touch your heart
    I looked at your closed eyes
    saddened by the deceit
    I walked away, didn't look back
    I left you there, just like that.
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