A poem by my 6 year old daughter

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  1. mommyB

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    I thought i would share this with you,she bought it home from school last week, they had to write about a fantasy setting. I think it's great,but then I am doing my proud mum bit !!


    If the sea was chocolate
    and the trees were ice cream
    If the fish were gummy fish
    and the cows were gummy bears
    If the birds were cold gums
    and chocolate bars ruled the world
    If whipped cream poured down instead of rain
    and the sea was made of chocolate
    If everyone had apple pie houses
    and we all lived in them

    I WOULD LOVE IT !!!
     
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    I have to agree with her there! It would be fantastic!

    Clever girl. I have a six year old who loves to write songs and stories. I think we have some budding poets and authors in the making!
     
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    I will be very suprised if she doesnt end up in some form of entertainment when she's older
     
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    A poet in the making with a wonderful imaginations:happy096:
     
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    Lovely poem by your daughter MommyB; encourage her creativity!
     
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    Thank you-yes she does have a fantastic imagination
     
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    yup, what a lovely world it would be...
    you should definitely do your proud mummy thing! ;)
     
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    Love it!! lol. xx
     
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    Speaking as someone who works with kids, that really is very good!

    Also, yummy lol :)
     
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    Thank you !
     
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    Well done to her - can I come and liver ther too? x
     
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    What a good poem for a 6 year old.
     
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    Aww thats so cute
     
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    cute
     
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    Haha that is brilliant for someone of 6!!! U have a wee talent there!!
     
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